Discussion of the Novermber 2005 SAT essay prompt about beauty.
Paraphrases of the four November SAT essay prompts:
- Should our perceptions of beauty be influenced by the perceptions of beauty
of other people?
- Is it necessary to praise or flatter people?
- Is conflict helpful?
- Do people now (i.e., did they not in the past?) use money (and the things
that money can buy) to measure success instead of using more meaningful ways
to measure success?
These essay topics are fairly standard for the SAT test and should not come
as a surprise to anybody who has effectively prepared for the test. Yes, they
may be difficult or confusing for some people, but not surprising.
I am preparing very general outlines of these SAT essay prompts, which I will
post links to as I complete them.
Should we be influenced by what other people think is beautiful?
The first thing I notice about this question is that it uses the word should
instead of the word are; in other words, instead of asking whether we
are influenced by others' perceptions of beauty, it asks whether we should
be influenced by them. Of course most people realize that our perceptions of
beauty are in fact quite dependent on what others think, so perhaps it'd be
too easy to ask simply whether we are or are not influenced by others' perceptions
of beauty. But using the modal should also present problems--of course we should
not be influenced by others (aren't we trained to think independently?), but
we are.
Most of the people I know at least pay lip service to the idea that we should
all form independent judgments of beauty. But the first rule of writing essays
for ETS tests is that we must follow the prompt, although I must admit from
reading dozens of officially-scored SAT essays (yes, my students show me the
essays they wrote on "test day"), the SAT seems to be fairly lenient
about what it will accept as a correct interpretation of the prompt.
For this SAT essay prompt, you could take several approaches. The most obvious
approach, and the one I would take, would be to write an essay that says that
people should not be influenced by others' perceptions of beauty, but they are.
I would use examples to show how the public's opinions of beauty have shifted
over the years as a direct result of clever marketing, specifically shaving
habits of both women and men, and men's increasing use of hair products.
To play devil's advocate, you could also argue that people should be influenced
by the opinions of others. I could imagine an essay that would detail the importance
of conforming to society's norms in order to fit in. Of course, I don't agree
with this stance, but since the SAT cannot lower your score based solely on
your opinion, it could be possible. To stay on the SAT scorer's good side, though,
perhaps you could mention that you hold these beliefs purely for purposes of
the good of society--perhaps the collective knowledge of society should sometimes
outweigh the opinion of the individual. For this one you could use a relatively
simple example of your friends' talking you out of buying an overpriced outfit
at an upscale designer clothing store. For example, you thought the tattered
fur jacket looked good, even at $750, but your friends convinced you that it
was ugly. |